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Doll Control
Doll Control
“Congratulations Maddie, you won the duck shooting contest. Here’s your prize,” a heavy set man in red suspenders said to a little girl with black pigtails as a group of onlookers were cheering out of politeness. The girl grabbed the doll and hugged it close to her body.
“Yay! Thank you, Mr. Carnival Man,”  Maddie said gleefully, as she took a good look at the doll, which was a doll made out of felt with a smile on her face, brown hair that went down to her shoulders made out of string, and a blue and red striped dress. After getting her good look at the doll, Maddie went up to her parents, who were standing in the front row.
“That was amazing Maddie. I knew you could do it,” Maddie’s father said, raising his drink to his daughter’s victory. Her mother picked her up, and engulfed her into a hug.
“I hope you had fun, sweetie, but we have to go now,” her mother said before letting her go, putting h
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Brawl Between the Besties (Chapter 3)
Brawl Between the Besties (Chapter 3)
Madison and Kim were still glaring at each other, while everyone was waiting patiently for Sunny to start the song. They then started making faces at each other before Sunny banged his conductor stick on the music stand, and started the song.
While playing the song, Kim got an evil smirk on her face. She stepped away from her xylophones, and grabbed her cymbals. Kim then snuck right behind Madison, who was entranced in playing her violin, and banged the cymbals together as hard as she could right in Madison's ear.
"OW!" Madison screamed, as she put her hands on her ears, seeing everything around her shaking. Sunny stopped the song, and pointed his conductor stick at Kim.
"Kim, why did you do that?" Sunny asked. Kim threw the cymbals down, and put an innocent look on her face.
"Oops. Slipped," Kim said simply, scratching the back of her head, feigning innocence. Madison responded by glaring at her. Sunny decided not to push the issue and went to the
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Follow the White Rabbit
Follow the White Rabbit
A man clad in a white suit with matching white pants was walking through the grass of a forest near the edge of San Francisco. The light reflected off his sunglasses and white teeth as he strolled through the grass, looking for his apprentice.
He had sent his apprentice to perform the next task on the list; follow the white rabbit. So, he stayed back with the staff they had retrieved before this next mission, and was waiting for his apprentice to come with the fruits of his progress.  A minute later, his apprentice came, with his medium length blonde hair flowing in the wind as he ran.
“Ah, my beloved apprentice, how goes your search for the white rabbit?” the man asked, with his arms up in the air, allowing the sun to reflect off the red orb on the top of his staff. The young apprentice ran his hand through his dirty blonde hair, and took a deep breath.
“No, I didn’t,” he said simply, leaving his master gob smacked. Whi
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The Short and Cheesy Song
I saw you in my dreams, but never again
When I woke up, I wondered when
I would ever meet you
And I know you do too
I will find your heart
My love for you is like a piece of art
I will make you mine
Our life together will be so fine
You and me will be together
We’ll stay with each other forever
Our love will always being the heat
It truly is an impressive feat.
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The Drifter
The Drifter
Here I am. Another lonely day, walking through the streets of a town that I don’t even know, looking at the stares of people who I never met, and seeing the buildings that I’ve never been in. It’s been three days, and I’ve been trying to get my name out there. It’s not like I had much with me. All I had were the clothes off my back, the change in my pocket, and the steel string acoustic guitar I’ve had since I was a little kid.
Ever since I could remember, I had a passion for music. My parents, contrary to the stereotype, were very supportive of my cause, and paid for music lessons, helped me secure jobs at various clubs and cafes, and gave me a place to live while I was making meager wages. However, that all changed a couple of months ago with a simple cigarette. That cigarette caused the entire house to be engulfed in flames, killing my parents, and leaving me alone and without a home.
Ever since that day, I have been walking around the
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Family Reunion (Chapter 2)
Family Reunion (Chapter 2)
The next day…
Yukino and Sorano were waiting for their parents at the train station. Yukino was only doing this for her sister, and had no interest in meeting her parents, so she was just sitting back on the bench while Sorano was standing near the train tracks waiting for their parents. Then, the train stopped, and all the passengers got out of the train, but two caught Sorano's eye.
One had short and spiky hair, glasses, and was slightly overweight, and the other person was a thin woman with bleach blonde hair. The short man was wearing something resembling a lab coat, while the woman was wearing a long blue sundress. Sorano walked up to the both of them, and hugged them.
"Hi Mom, hi Dad," Sorano said while she was hugging them.
"Hello hun, how is everything?" her mother asked.
"Good, me and Yukino are doing great," Sorano answered.
"Well, where is Yukino?" her dad asked while looking around.
"Oh, she's over by the benches," Sorano said while pointing
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Spirit of Fall
Cool breezes
Many colors abound
Beautiful leaves gently raining down
A magical time
Honoring spirits
And a time for family
Comforting food
Pumpkin pies and turkey
Bring back memories
Truly a mystic time
Full of beauty and wonder
Blessing us every year
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Bleeding Red and Gold
They see me every year
Landing on their toes and curling up in the sun.
Once here but then gone.
Listen, do you hear my voice?
A cool whisper stealthy moves among the trees.
An invisible hand guiding the first fall gently to the ground.
Like a baby being rocked slowly to sleep,
I float silently to the earth my time now done.
The greenery of youth to a golden yellow age only to be trampled by white death.
Its cold grip wraps around my veins freezing them.
In a few months my friends will be left bare without me except for a few.
Mocking a lifeforce that can only last so long.
The crunch of crisp apples, friendly hay rides,
pumpkin patches, and dizzying corn mazes
Line my heartbeat.
The final act ending in buckets of candy and
Strangely dressed up humans.
I go out in a plethora of orange, red, yellow, and black.
Dancing with werewolves in the night
And laughing with witches till the stars bend.
Life is short for me, but I’ll return full force next year.
Who am I? You ask.
I am Autum
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Now I want Alicia Fox to be Women's Champion. She's just too damn funny!
You know, when I have the free time, I'm going to start writing some Loud House fanfics. I have ideas for a couple, and I want to start them as soon as I could. Let me know what you guys think about that.

Oh, and don't worry. There's not going to be any "Loud-cest" or any romance stories.
So, I've gone without my glasses for a week, and nobody has said a thing. It's so weird.
When I heard about the Bob's Burger's movie that they're making, I was thinking; "What's it going to be about?".
So...now Curt Hawkins is 1-120. Who is going to be the one who he beats to break the streak?
Who is one wrestler that you want to see win the World Championship, who hasn't? For me, it'd either be Apollo Crews or Tye Dillinger. 
These are some characters that make me feel bad for them, and have lives that would at times make Hell seem like a better option than the lives they're living. So, here they are.

1. Yuu Kotari (Black Rock Shooter):
She is a character I feel so bad for. I mean, how does someone live the life she's lived? So, she is bullied by her classmates for...largely no reason. I've never really been able to find a reason. I mean, she's really short, but so is her friend, who is much more popular. She's also neglected by her parents. The episode summary says that she was abused by her parent's too, but they showed more neglect than abuse, with her sitting in a corner of a dilapidated house with her parents on the couch, not even paying her any mind. That alone wouldn't make her the character I feel the most sympathy for, but there is one thing that makes me feel bad for her. She is so miserable in her life, that she connects to someone from another world, where all they do is fight to the death, and she trades places with one of the fighters. That's right, she'd rather spend the rest of her life fighting than living in her real life. Sure, she has a happy ending, but still...that whole thing noticing Yuu's rotten life made me sad. Not bad sad but, sad to the point where I tried to write a story about a girl trying to make up for causing a girl's suicide. Thank God quantum-plasma-field talked me out of writing it. The anime is amazing, but this is just...so sad.

2. Meg Griffin (Family Guy): One of the main reasons I stopped watching Family Guy was that one of the show's main focuses became beating on Meg for no discernable reason. I mean, how would you feel if you had an entire family that made you feel like shit? Not just that, but the entire town hates her. For what? For being ugly, which is stupid. She's not ugly, she basically looks like a slightly chubbier and shorter than Lois. I'm just saying, it's not funny when a lot of the jokes involving Meg are just that she sucks and that everyone hates her. I mean, it's just horrible to watch the world laugh at kicking someone down, especially someone who is a far cry from the bitch she was in previous seasons. If she were more like that, than this wouldn't be as horrible. However, they made her just a blank slate, so it's just awful to see someone who, for the most part, does nothing wrong, have an entire town hate on her for...reasons.

3. Squidward Tentacles (SpongeBob): My sympathy for Squidward goes back to the days before I even knew MrEnter existed. As I got older and still watched the show, I started to empathize with Squidward a lot more than when I was a stupid little kiddy wink. I mean, having to deal with annoying neighbors 24/7, having a dead end job, and dealing with an entire town full of stupid people. I don't know why it took me years to feel bad foe the guy. I mean, no wonder he's so miserable. I'd be miserable too is I had to live with all those people and being forced to work a dead end job at a burger place. I always tell people that as you grow up, you start to like Squidward, and dislike SpongeBob more. Maybe it's the change in the writing, or it was just growing up, but I cannot look at SpongeBob and Squidward the same way I did when I was a kid.

4. Ed (Ed, Edd, n Eddy): I said in the first part of my "Top 15 Worst Characters" journal ( My Top 15 Most Hated Characters (Part 1)So, I did a list of 20 characters I didn't like. A lot of people wanted me to list some reasons as to why, so OK. These are 15 characters that I hate bar none. There are no excuses, no second chances, no nothing. These are 10 characters that if they were on life support, I would unplug the life support to charge my Samsung Note 4. The listing in this is arbitrary, I have enough hate for all of these characters to go around equally. With that out of the way, I hope you enjoy.
1. Michiko Malandro (Michiko to Hatchin):
So, in that old list I made, I got questioned by Flutterbunny76 about including Zakuro from Tokyo Mew Mew and Huey from the Boondocks on my worst character list, and he was right. Honestly, I was trying to fill up space, and I couldn't think of many other characters. I mean, I'm not a fan of them, but hating them sounded really stupid. And thanks to PerfectZanderSanchez I remember a character I SHOULD'VE put on this list; Michiko Malandro, one of the main character
) why I feel bad for Ed. His bitchy little sister, Sarah, has such a stranglehold at the home, that she just has to bring up telling their Mother about something Ed did (or in some cases, supposedly did) and Ed gets sent into a panic. It clearly shows some parental favoritism, and it's just really awful looking back. I never really noticed it as a kid, but it sucks that someone as nice as Ed has to constantly live in fear of his parents believing any type of story Sarah makes, b ut  up. I mean, I makes some episodes hard to watch, especially ones with Sarah as a main point in the episode. I just hope Child Protective Services comes soon.

5. Nina Tucker and Alexander (Fullmetal Alchemist Brotherhood): Before you say anything, yes I know that they were in the original, but I'm watching Brotherhood, which is a much better version of the original. And after what MislamicPearl told me about her Dad in the old series, I probably won't watch it. Nina and her dog, Alexander are just an average kid and an average dog, trying to enjoy life. Then, her failure of a father, again coming from my "Top 15 Most Hated Characters list ( My Top 15 Most Hated Characters (Part 1)So, I did a list of 20 characters I didn't like. A lot of people wanted me to list some reasons as to why, so OK. These are 15 characters that I hate bar none. There are no excuses, no second chances, no nothing. These are 10 characters that if they were on life support, I would unplug the life support to charge my Samsung Note 4. The listing in this is arbitrary, I have enough hate for all of these characters to go around equally. With that out of the way, I hope you enjoy.
1. Michiko Malandro (Michiko to Hatchin):
So, in that old list I made, I got questioned by Flutterbunny76 about including Zakuro from Tokyo Mew Mew and Huey from the Boondocks on my worst character list, and he was right. Honestly, I was trying to fill up space, and I couldn't think of many other characters. I mean, I'm not a fan of them, but hating them sounded really stupid. And thanks to PerfectZanderSanchez I remember a character I SHOULD'VE put on this list; Michiko Malandro, one of the main character
), realizes that he's going to lose his State Alchemist license because he's a failure as an alchemist, and decides to do a last minute experiment. And that experiment is turning Nina and Alexander into a talking Chimera. This change is permanent, and they can never turn back to normal. It sucks especially because Nina still loves her Dad, and it's very clear as Ed is beating up Shou. I just hate seeing kids that're abused still loving their parents. It's why I don't like Your Lie in April and Naruto because it's such a big part of both of those animes (at least unlike Brotherhood, we're not supposed to sympathize and care about the abusers). I was going to do a separate thing for Hinata and Naruto, but I'll just lump it in here, as the problem is evident in all three of these animes, with parent's not caring about their kids. At least in Brotherhood, this is the only time that it happens. I hate the fact that these kids love their scumbags of parents. I don't care if they're their parents, they don't act like it, and therefore, they don't deserve to have any part in their lives. 

6. Hana "Hatchin" Morenos (Michiko to Hatchin): Once again, kind of explained it in my "Top 15 Most Hated Characters List" ( My Top 15 Most Hated Characters (Part 1)So, I did a list of 20 characters I didn't like. A lot of people wanted me to list some reasons as to why, so OK. These are 15 characters that I hate bar none. There are no excuses, no second chances, no nothing. These are 10 characters that if they were on life support, I would unplug the life support to charge my Samsung Note 4. The listing in this is arbitrary, I have enough hate for all of these characters to go around equally. With that out of the way, I hope you enjoy.
1. Michiko Malandro (Michiko to Hatchin):
So, in that old list I made, I got questioned by Flutterbunny76 about including Zakuro from Tokyo Mew Mew and Huey from the Boondocks on my worst character list, and he was right. Honestly, I was trying to fill up space, and I couldn't think of many other characters. I mean, I'm not a fan of them, but hating them sounded really stupid. And thanks to PerfectZanderSanchez I remember a character I SHOULD'VE put on this list; Michiko Malandro, one of the main character
) but some of, if not all of, this stuff is worth repeating. I mean, she has to live with an abusive family. They're like crazy Christian people (well, at least the Dad is) who treat her like a slave. Seriously, when this show was advertised on Adult Swim, they literally showed her doing the chores of the house, and her getting picked on in a variety of ways. Now, you might think that her mother coming to save her was going to be an improvement for her, but...no, it wasn't. In fact, she got put in more danger than she was back in her crazy house, and that is really saying something. I mean, she get's kidnapped by gangs, beaten, robbed, and more. She probably would've been safer back at the house. She also doesn't get the best ending. Oh, and I forgot to mention, that's another reason why I hate this show; the crappy ending. I don't want to spoil it for you, but it makes the entire adventure Michiko and Hatchin go on pointless.

7. Butters (South Park): The first half of season 6 was "Torture Butters, the Show". I can list the plots of the first half of season 6 right now; the boys come up with a plan, use Butter's as a Guinea pig, and Butter's shitty parent's get in trouble at the end. Yeah, his parent's are terrible, and he is taken advantage of by the main 4 a lot. There's even an episode where Butter's mom tries to kill him because her husband was going to a gay porno theater. I asked you all a while back if Butter's parents are worse than Timmy Turner's parents, and everyone who responded said yes. And I have to agree, I mean, at least Timmy's dad is funny. There's nothing funny or entertaining about Butter's parents, and it makes me wish that he had gotten away with his evil plans as Professor Chaos. 

And that's all I can think of at the moment, but please don't hesitate to give me some suggestions. In the meantime, take a look at my account if you like this. After this, I'll probably do a journal on Black Rock Shooter, and, if 022288knarrow doesn't reply back to me on the discussion on "Candace get's Busted", if anyone else likes that episode, and wants to discuss with me, don't hesitate to ask. I also plan on doing a journal on Stein's Gate, Camp Camp, and a character comparison with Dan from Dan vs vs. Candace from Phineas and Ferb.
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You know what made me want to say "I will watch Soul Eater when I have the time"? The scene where all the characters are taking a test, and everything about that scene made me laugh. 
I'm currently working on a list of the characters I feel sorry for. These are people who have miserable lives and like I say in the journal, Hell would be a better option for these people.
For any Camp Camp fans, what did you think of the Halloween special? I thought it was great! 
Yes. Yes it is. This may be because I'm a writer, but this is just what I believe. A show can look as good as possible, and animate as amazingly as possible, but without a great, or at least good story to accompany it, there's pretty much nothing to go back to. There are so many examples of shows and movies that look great, but lack any memorable or good story.

One instance of this is the show No Game No Life. This show is not bad at all. The overall story is great, and the animation is beautiful and colorful, but there is one problem; the constant moments of ecchi. Me, PerfectZanderSanchez , and thecrimsondemon14 both agree that this show would be a million times better if the ecchi scenes between Sora and his 11 year old sister weren't there. I mean, I like both Sora and Shino, but I don't want to see them kiss, even if it is to preserve oxygen (...long story).

Speaking of PerfectZanderSanchez both he and I agree that Michiko to Hatchin is a terrible anime. Like No Game No Life, it looks great, but it has such bad writing. You see, the first two episodes are about a girl in an abusive foster family, and her mother coming to help her escape. The problem is that this plot point is forgotten for nearly the entire anime, and it essentially turns into a buddy cop show. The abuse is mentioned like only once, and the ending is just the worst, making this entire anime pointless. 

It's also why some people like AstonLevy and Hexidextrous don't like Star vs the Forces of Evil. They don't hate it because it looks bad (it looks alright, though it has some uncanny designs for people like Janna), they hate it because they think the writing sucks. They hate the way Star's written, they hate the way Marco's written, they hate how the stories are full of randomness, among other things. I personally agree with them that the stories go too quickly. For instance, the first episode of the show goes from point to point too quickly. I always wonder why Star vs isn't 22 minutes an episode like Gravity Falls. 

This is also kind of why I never got into Phineas and Ferb. I don't hate the show, but I can't see why people would put it on the same level as Gravity Falls, Ed, Edd, n Eddy, or Fullmetal Alchemist Brotherhood. I mean, it's basically the same story being told almost every episode. Yeah, Dan vs, which I really like, is kind of guilty of this, but it's different situations surrounding the similar situations. One episode, Dan is waging war against the state of New Mexico, and in another he's waging war with an animal shelter. But Phineas and Ferb, every story is essentialy this; Phineas and Ferb want to build something, their friends come on the scene, Candace tries to bust them, and fails, with Perry going to fight Dr. Doofenshmirtz throughout the entirety of the show. That gets tiring after a while, and loses it charm. But, that's just my opinion. 

Think about that Death Note movie for a second. Why do people hate it? For the most part, it looks great and has awesome effects. So, why do people hate it? The writing is shit. It moves too far from the source material, makes unnecessary changes to the characters, makes the entire story take place in America, among other things. I'm personally not a big Death Note fan, but I assume that this would piss of big fans of the show and the manga. 

It's also why me and MislamicPearl prefer Fullmetal Alchemist Brotherhood over the original. The original has some baffling decisions, such as bringing Shou Tucker back for...no reason. He's was never that great of an alchemist if he had to resort to taboos to be successful. At least when Fairy Tail did it they brought back people from Grimore Heart, who were actually powerful and took more than a few punches to beat. They also fucked up the ending since the creator had no say in the ending.

Going back to Dan vs, this is a show that doesn't have the greatest animation that has great stories and great writing. It takes a level of talent to make me like a guy who essentially goes around swearing revenge on the stupidest things. I always find myself laughing at the show, and especially at Dan and his antics.

Another show like that? Bob's Burgers. It has the standard animation with nothing special, but it's still one of my favorite shows of all time. Why? Because it has great stories, great characters, and genuine moments of heart. Also, they have multiple episodes where three stories are told by the children, but they always manage to make it feel fresh. That is a great accomplishment, and just makes me love the show even more.

 What I'm trying to say is that writing really makes a show great. Black Rock Shooter can look like Puffy Ami Yumi, and it still has a great story to fall back on. Panty and Stocking doesn't look the best, but it is hilarious despite the crude humor. South Park and Camp Camp don't have the best animation, but they still tell good stories, and they're funny. If animation looks good, that's great, but if its something like "Screams of Silence" or Blugeoning Angel Doruko Chan, who really cares. Then again, Doruko Chan has more problems than just the writing, and the animation is a big problem. The point I'm trying to make is that the story being told is just as, if not more, important than the animation quality. 

Thank you for joining me. Here are some of my other writings if you're interested; Thoughts on Bludgeoning Angel Doruko Chan    ControChoices: Candace Get's Busted    Thoughts on No Laughing Matter    Can a Bad Character Ruin a Show?

And here's a song for you all to leave with: 
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Oh, I forgot to ask you guys if you have any people who should be on the list of the characters that I feel sorry for. 

Do you guys have a character that you feel particularly sorry for?
I also plan on doing a list on the characters that I feel the most sorry for. You will not know who #1 is. Well, I KNOW most of you won't. 
I love Baron Corbin's new theme song. The lyrics make that song they tried to stick him with great!
Doll Control

“Congratulations Maddie, you won the duck shooting contest. Here’s your prize,” a heavy set man in red suspenders said to a little girl with black pigtails as a group of onlookers were cheering out of politeness. The girl grabbed the doll and hugged it close to her body.

“Yay! Thank you, Mr. Carnival Man,”  Maddie said gleefully, as she took a good look at the doll, which was a doll made out of felt with a smile on her face, brown hair that went down to her shoulders made out of string, and a blue and red striped dress. After getting her good look at the doll, Maddie went up to her parents, who were standing in the front row.

“That was amazing Maddie. I knew you could do it,” Maddie’s father said, raising his drink to his daughter’s victory. Her mother picked her up, and engulfed her into a hug.

“I hope you had fun, sweetie, but we have to go now,” her mother said before letting her go, putting her back on the ground. Maddie looked at her mother in surprise.

“Awww…but we just got here,” Maddie offered, wanting to finally go see the new animals in the petting zoo.

“I got an e-mail from my job, hun. My presentation got moved to tomorrow, and I have to make the last couple of slides,” her mother countered. Maddie sighed, knowing how busy and demanding her mother’s job can be sometimes. Just then, the doll’s eyes glowed purple, and when the mother noticed the light and looked down at the doll, her eyes turned purple too. She then blinked and shook her head.

“Well sweetie, we can stay an extra half hour to see that new petting zoo you were so excited about,” the mother said, leaving the father and daughter surprised.

“But Mommy, what about your big p...p…pres…pre…” Maddie stammered, struggling to remember the word her mother used.

“My presentation can wait thirty minutes, sweetie,” the mother answered, before she grabbed her daughter’s hand, and led her to the petting zoo. Maddie, not knowing what had caused her mother’s quick change of tune, hummed the short distance to the petting zoo, while clutching the doll close to her chest.

Thirty minutes later, the family of three left the fair, with Maddie still clutching the doll close to her chest. She briefly thought how weird it was that her mother suddenly changed her mind and let her stay longer. But, she chose not to question it as to not ruin anything. When they got into the car, Maddie sat the doll next to her, and once she was buckled in, the family began the drive back to their house. Unbeknownst to Maddie or her parents, the doll’s eyes started to glow a faint purple.

The Next Morning…


Maddie was sitting at the breakfast table with the doll sitting in a high chair next to her, looking at her father. She was suspicious of her parent’s behavior last night. Last night alone, they let her have candy before bed, let her skip brushing her teeth, and even let her not wash her hands after using the bathroom. It was weird, and she was going to get to the bottom of it.

“Hi Daddy,” Maddie said cautiously, not knowing what would happen next. Sure enough, her father passed the bowl of sugar to her.

“Good morning, Maddie. Hope you like the sugar, it should make your corn flakes taste a lot better,” her father said with a smile. This did nothing to assuage Maddie’s suspicion. Her parents would never have given her sugar before she went to school. Before she could say anything, she heard the school bus turn into her neighborhood. She scooped spoons of corn flakes with added sugar into her mouth at lightning speeds before slinging her backpack over her shoulder and ran out the door.

“Bye Mommy, bye Daddy,” Maddie shouted before she ran to the bus stop in front of her house just as the bus arrived. When she got on the bus, she immediately started talking with a friend of hers, thinking that after a day if kindergarten, her parents would be back to normal.

Once she arrived in her classroom, Maddie put her backpack in her cubby, but not before getting the doll out of her backpack, and sitting it down on her desk. Then, the teacher came in, and before she started the class, she noticed the doll on Maddie’s desk.

“Maddie, you know the rules; no toys from home are allowed in my classroom,” the teacher stated before heading to Maddie’s desk, and taking the doll off of her desk. “You may have this back at the end of the class,” the teacher stated again, heading towards her desk. Before Maddie could complain about it, the doll’s eyes glowed purple again, stopping the teacher dead in her tracks.

“Well, this is your first offense, so I’ll let you keep the doll. Just make sure that it doesn’t happen again,” the teacher said as she walked back to the desk, and put the doll back on Maddie’s desk. Maddie, along with the rest of the class looked at the teacher like they had just seen a ghost juggling chainsaws.

“Maddie, what happened?” Maddie’s friend, Hanna, asked. They had never known their teacher to waiver her stance on any of her rules, no matter the circumstances or who the child is.

“I don’t know. My Mommy and Daddy were acting weird too,” Maddie answered. Hanna grabbed the doll from off of the desk, and looked closely at it, specifically the doll’s eyes.

“Maybe it’s the doll. It glowed and then the teacher gave her back,” Hanna suggested, leaving Maddie dumbstruck for a hot second. Maddie then laughed at Hanna.

“Hanna, that’s dumb. It’s just a cute little dollie. There’s no way that she did anything,” Maddie answered quite loudly, earning them a shush from the teacher. However, before the teacher could say anything else, the doll’s eyes glowed again, and the teacher turned back to the board, not saying anything else. Maddie and Hanna looked at each other, both seeing the doll’s eyes glowing again.

After class, Maddie and Hanna were both looking at the doll, trying to figure out a logical explanation for what happened between the doll and the teacher.  

“I told you Maddie! That doll is evil!” Hanna shouted, pointing at the doll and causing the other kids in the hallway to look at them.

“Well, it was weird. Maybe the dollie did the same thing to Mommy and Daddy,” Maddie responded. Before they could say anything else, the bell rang, signaling the two that it was time for P.E.

Throughout the day, Maddie continued to notice the bizarre behavior that the doll most likely caused. Not only did the doll allow the P.E. teacher to give Maddie the day off from any of the physical activity, but got the lunch lady to give her extra dessert, and her teacher to give her an A on her sentence writing assignment, despite the fact that even she knew that her sentences were horrible.

And throughout all of those events, she finally noticed the one constant; the doll’s eyes glowed purple when Maddie was thinking of not wanting to do something or wanting something and it would magically happen.

After school, Maddie looked over the doll, trying to find something about the doll that would show what’s wrong with it. When she got home, she noticed two things; one was that her parents were not home, and the second thing was that the doll’s head turned 180 degrees like an owl, so that the doll and Maddie were staring face to face.

“Hello Maddie,” the doll said, in a very young and cutsey sounding voice. Maddie’s eyes nearly popped out of her head, not believing what she just heard.

“Uh…wha…uh…huh?” Maddie stammered, not being able to comprehend what she just heard.

“I understand that you must be confused, so allow me to introduce myself. I am Lucy Ipher. I was born from the darkest magic to spread chaos into this world. My job was to hypnotize people who crossed you, and made it so you would get your way,” Lucy explained to a still stunned Maddie. Maddie shook her head before looking at her doll right in the eyes.

“Why?” was the only thing that Maddie could think of.

“Well, you saw my hypnotizing people in this form. Unfortunately, that is ALL I can do in this form. To unleash my full power, I need a human host. And that my dear, is where you come in,” Lucy explained before pointing at Maddie. “You see, I figure that I butter you up, and once I earned your trust, you would let me possess your body so that I can truly obtain my power,” Lucy finished, leaving Maddie’s mouth wide agape with shock and fear.

“Won’t that hurt me?” Maddie asked, still not fully grasping the severity of the situation.

“Oh, I assure you, it will not hurt in the slightest. In fact, you will be sent to a void where you never get hurt, and will always stay a child,” Lucy answered, thinking that this was helping to seal the deal. In response, Maddie threw Lucy across the room, backing towards the wall, panting and sweating bullets as if she were a machine gun. Then, she saw that Lucy had stood up, and turned her head 180 degrees to face her. Her eyes, instead of glowing purple, were glowing red.

“That was a mistake,” Lucy growled, her voice sounding much more demonic than the childish voice she had just a minute ago. Lucy lunged at Maddie, causing Maddie to unleash a loud and high pitched scream.

Later that Day…

Maddie’s Mom and Dad pulled into the parking lot, and went into their house. When they did, they saw Maddie standing in the middle of the living room, with a faraway look in her eyes.

“Hi Maddie, how was school today?” her mother asked. Maddie doesn’t answer, surprising her parents, as Maddie always answered her parents when they asked her a question.

“Did you finish your homework?” her father asked. Maddie still didn’t answer, with her smile growing to an uncomfortable size. Her parents did a tiny jump backwards in response.

“Uhhh…Maddie sweetie, are you OK?” her father asked, getting scared of his daughter’s bizarre behavior.

“Oh. I’m fine, Daddy. Just fine,” Maddie said, with a smile on her face. While she was smiling, her eyes faintly glowed red.
Doll Control
This is the first of MrEnter 's 42 prompts. I messed it up a little bit, as Maddie is five instead of being eight like the prompt requires, but I don't think it hurts the story in any way. The only thing I really hate about this story is the title. I suck at titles, and this is prrbably one of my worst. But, at least the story is worth it. I'm trying to do the other 41 prompts as well. 

This prompt? "An eight-year-old girl wins a doll at the county fair, and soon discovers that its allows her to control the minds of adults". Again, the only change I made is that she's 5, as I skimmed over the age of the girl. 

Here are MrEnter 's 42 prompts if you're curious: mrenter.deviantart.com/journal…

So, if MrEnter ever does read it, what do you think?
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I hope you all take a look at the journal I made about Bludgeoning Angel Doruko-chan. That was anime that was hard to re-visit, and I want as many of you as possible to tell me how you thought I did.

Also Aston, what do you think of the line I gave you?
I have waited so long to rip this series a new one again. For those not in the know, I teamed up with torygreen to take on the first episode of this anime in our collab review of it  Tory Reviews: Bludgeoning Angel Dokuro-chan collabAll right, back from the hospital, fully up to strength, and everything is all cleaned up to see that I'm all better. But, I feel like I'm forgeting something.
:iconbluerockshooter109:: Try a collab that you said we would do.
Tory: Oh yeah,... what was it again, some Anime that you said was really bad? How bad could it be, are we talking School Days bad or Boku No Pico bad?
BlueRookShooter: It's somewhere near the middle, maybe closer to School Days.
Tory: Well, it can't be that bad dude. What are we even dealing with...

Tory: Son of a.... I can do this, I can do this.
Bluerocket: Dude, your not ready for this crap.
Tory: I'm fine Rocket! I've dealt with stupidier shit before, and besides your helping me out.
Bluerocket: By force, yes! Well, people your in for a bad review today. We're tackling an anime long
. There it is if you want to look at it, but for the past week, I don't think we touched on everything that made this anime terrible. Sure, we discussed some problems, but not everything. Let me discuss some of the problems I've noticed with this show.

First off, how it looks. It looks alright. I mean, it's nothing special except for two things. The first thing is that it looks like it has this blur effect throughout the anime like it came out in the 90's. But this anime came out in 2005. It's not like Nadia: the Secret of Blue Water and Slayers are good animes to come out of the 90's, and the characters and the backgrounds look like a 90's anime. Another thing about it is that the color pallet is really bland. This show has an energetic and happy tone, though watching it, you would not be happy watching this. And, it just looks so washed out. If this were something like Stein's Gate and Fullmetal Alchemist Brotherhood, which are very serious, and thriller-esque animes, then this color scheme would be understandable. But, this anime has a feel, at least tries to have a feel, similar to Miss Kobayashi's Dragon Maid. I mean, it has the angel trying to go to school, and that's not something that is exactly serious.

Also, whenever there's blood, it's just a geyser, which again is like anime from the 90's with the repeating frames. And with the REALLY disgusting faces in this show, they should've had the budget to do something at least somewhat impressive.

Oh, and it's not funny. At all. Nothing in this show makes me laugh. Only cry in my room for hours on end wondering on all the decisions I made in my life. Any of the jokes are either "HAHA LOOK AT SAKURA GETTING TORTURED!", "HAHA LISTEN TO THE TEACHER SAY PROVACATIVE THINGS ABOUT DORUKO-CHAN!", or "HAHA LOOK AT THE FACES DORUKO MAKES WHEN SHE HAS DIARRHEA. OH, AND SHE HAS DIARRHEA!". It takes more than doing something disgusting, sexual, or mean to make a joke. Especially when this show does it every fucking minute. Anyway, let's get to the 2nd point before I lose track.

Secondly, it's REALLY gross sometimes. I may be over-reacting or making a mountain out of a molehill with this, but come on, look at this!



I mean, they do these faces all the time, for no reason either. It's just there to be there, and it's not good. It just makes everything worse in my mind. Also, I don't know why they do this, when sometimes, they'll just take a photo of a monkey, and put it on the head of one of the kids. I mean, seriously? When you can do this shit, why would you do that? That's not only lazy, but it's stupid too. 

Another thing is the background characters. Doruko is the worst character on the show, but Sakura's classmates are a close second. I mean, they not only believe that Doruko and the other one with horns are angels, but they really don't care either. They also believe the angel's story that Sakura is going to create a pedophile world in the future without a second thought. I mean, they just believe him, and think that he's always been a pedo. But, it's not only that they're stupid, it's that they're assholes. Everyone picks on him in class when Doruko comes in the class because they think that they're together, and they pick on him throughout the class. Also, a minor nitpick, but one of the classmates is black, but he looks more like he should be white. It was just really distracting throughout the thing.

You know the weirdest thing about this? This anime got an English dub. Yeah. An English Dub. Not Black Rock Shooter, not Anne Happy, not Hinako Note, THIS anime got an English dub. And you know what else? They had some talent in this. The main boy is voiced by Johnny Yong Bosch, famous for his roles in Blue Exorcist and Code Geass. The main girl is voiced by Wendee Lee, whose voiced characters in Lucky Star and Nadia and the Secret of Blue Water. The girl in the thumbnail for the video is voiced by Laura Bailey, whose done the voice of Lust from Fullmetal Alchemist among others. It is just amazing how they got all this talent for something so shit. Johnny and Laura actually sound pretty good, but Wendee however, sounds really annoying. Her voice is so high pitched and grating, but at times she sounds like Konata from Lucky Star. And you have to deal with her throughout the show. Isn't that great?

Also, I didn't pay attention to the opening theme or the ending theme because I wanted to watch that episode as quick as I could. So, I can't tell you how bad or good the music on the show is. 

So, overall, this is a terrible show. Probably one of the worst animes I've ever seen, tied with School Days. Phantomstrider  put this as #10 on his Worst Animes List, but this should've been much higher. And, I'm not the only one who hates this show. Here are some quotes from actual people on Deviantart;

Hexidextrous : "It's basically most of the reasons why I despise Star Vs The Forces Of Evil, with a ton of disturbing blood and guts and perverted imagery added in." (He says that Star vs has a lot of torture towards a main character, is random, and the character are annoying)

Bioniclezilla76 :
""Anime was a mistake; presenting, Exibit A" (A bit of an overreaction, but the point is still there)

antoxicmoth :
"let's say i wanted slap mine past self making a neopet base on of the main characters" (Take that for what you will)

Flutterbunny76
"I went into this show not realizing how god-awful it was gonna be. I knew it would be bad, but I watched it anyway and it ended up being MUCH worse than I expected. The fact that the whole show revolves around an "angel" constantly assassinating a supposedly innocent junior high-schooler is disgusting in itself, but that's really only the tip of the iceberg on this show's glaring problems. Believe me when I say that Bludgeoning Angel Dokuro-Chan does everything it can to be as horrible, disgusting, and uncomfortably awkward as possible." (...amen buddy, amen).

AstonLevy
: "I wish Donald Trump would build a wall around this show instead of Mexico"

OK, that last one was made up, but the point is this anime sucks, and everything about it sucks. The only good things about this anime is that Johnny Bosch and Laura Bailey do a good job with their voices. The only person I know who had anything good to say about this show is one of the members of CBCAnime , saying that she thought it was funny at first, but got boring and mean spirited as the show went on. 
I respect her opinion, but...this is a shit show. 

And here are some other journal entries: ControChoices: Candace Get's Busted    Thoughts on No Laughing Matter     Top Ten Of My Best Written Works (Part 1) 

Now, here's a song for you to leave this review with: 
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You know, who cares if a show is made for girls or made for boys? I mean, I like things like the Powerpuff Girls (the ORIGINAL), Totally Spies, Tokyo Mew Mew (yes, the 4Kids dub is fine. Not great, but fine), and Hanazuki. Those shows are great, and they're 'for girls'. Whatever, I'll like them, and nobody can stop me.
Based on ControChoices by Intrancity 

Show:
Phineas and Ferb

User's Rating: Good

A.R.R. Rating: Bad

Plot: Candace inadvertently throws a party despite her parents telling her not to invite ANY people.

Opinion: Honestly, this episode is pretty ordinary when it comes to Phineas and Ferb, but most people seem to hate it because of Candace getting in trouble at the end. That's what makes this episode good. I mean, think about it; Candace tries to bust her brother everyday for no discernable reason.  This time, Candace goes against her parent's orders, and rightfully get's punished. I know the party wasn't her fault, and that she only invited like two friends to her house. But still, that goes against her parent's orders. She kind of deserved to get in trouble. Plus, she was sent to her room, not sent to a military school. She'll be fine. I also consider it karma for all the times she's harassed her brothers over their inventions that don't hurt them or anyone else, and Candace is just going after them...because. I respect any of you who like Candace and all, and see this as unfair, but I don't agree. This episode, as someone who hates Candace, is one that makes me feel all soft and fuzzy inside. 

Highlights: Candace getting in trouble

Make sure to read my other journals, such as Thoughts on No Laughing Matter and Top Ten Of My Best Written Works (Part 1)
OK, so I'm going to make a journal about Bludgeoning  Angel Doruko Chan, and I need one more quote to put into the journal. So, if any of you have ever watched that show, give me a quote to tell me what you thought of it. The best one gets to be in the journal. 

I'll make another journal with the honorable mentions so that you all don't feel left out.

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These are some characters that make me feel bad for them, and have lives that would at times make Hell seem like a better option than the lives they're living. So, here they are.

1. Yuu Kotari (Black Rock Shooter):
She is a character I feel so bad for. I mean, how does someone live the life she's lived? So, she is bullied by her classmates for...largely no reason. I've never really been able to find a reason. I mean, she's really short, but so is her friend, who is much more popular. She's also neglected by her parents. The episode summary says that she was abused by her parent's too, but they showed more neglect than abuse, with her sitting in a corner of a dilapidated house with her parents on the couch, not even paying her any mind. That alone wouldn't make her the character I feel the most sympathy for, but there is one thing that makes me feel bad for her. She is so miserable in her life, that she connects to someone from another world, where all they do is fight to the death, and she trades places with one of the fighters. That's right, she'd rather spend the rest of her life fighting than living in her real life. Sure, she has a happy ending, but still...that whole thing noticing Yuu's rotten life made me sad. Not bad sad but, sad to the point where I tried to write a story about a girl trying to make up for causing a girl's suicide. Thank God quantum-plasma-field talked me out of writing it. The anime is amazing, but this is just...so sad.

2. Meg Griffin (Family Guy): One of the main reasons I stopped watching Family Guy was that one of the show's main focuses became beating on Meg for no discernable reason. I mean, how would you feel if you had an entire family that made you feel like shit? Not just that, but the entire town hates her. For what? For being ugly, which is stupid. She's not ugly, she basically looks like a slightly chubbier and shorter than Lois. I'm just saying, it's not funny when a lot of the jokes involving Meg are just that she sucks and that everyone hates her. I mean, it's just horrible to watch the world laugh at kicking someone down, especially someone who is a far cry from the bitch she was in previous seasons. If she were more like that, than this wouldn't be as horrible. However, they made her just a blank slate, so it's just awful to see someone who, for the most part, does nothing wrong, have an entire town hate on her for...reasons.

3. Squidward Tentacles (SpongeBob): My sympathy for Squidward goes back to the days before I even knew MrEnter existed. As I got older and still watched the show, I started to empathize with Squidward a lot more than when I was a stupid little kiddy wink. I mean, having to deal with annoying neighbors 24/7, having a dead end job, and dealing with an entire town full of stupid people. I don't know why it took me years to feel bad foe the guy. I mean, no wonder he's so miserable. I'd be miserable too is I had to live with all those people and being forced to work a dead end job at a burger place. I always tell people that as you grow up, you start to like Squidward, and dislike SpongeBob more. Maybe it's the change in the writing, or it was just growing up, but I cannot look at SpongeBob and Squidward the same way I did when I was a kid.

4. Ed (Ed, Edd, n Eddy): I said in the first part of my "Top 15 Worst Characters" journal ( My Top 15 Most Hated Characters (Part 1)So, I did a list of 20 characters I didn't like. A lot of people wanted me to list some reasons as to why, so OK. These are 15 characters that I hate bar none. There are no excuses, no second chances, no nothing. These are 10 characters that if they were on life support, I would unplug the life support to charge my Samsung Note 4. The listing in this is arbitrary, I have enough hate for all of these characters to go around equally. With that out of the way, I hope you enjoy.
1. Michiko Malandro (Michiko to Hatchin):
So, in that old list I made, I got questioned by Flutterbunny76 about including Zakuro from Tokyo Mew Mew and Huey from the Boondocks on my worst character list, and he was right. Honestly, I was trying to fill up space, and I couldn't think of many other characters. I mean, I'm not a fan of them, but hating them sounded really stupid. And thanks to PerfectZanderSanchez I remember a character I SHOULD'VE put on this list; Michiko Malandro, one of the main character
) why I feel bad for Ed. His bitchy little sister, Sarah, has such a stranglehold at the home, that she just has to bring up telling their Mother about something Ed did (or in some cases, supposedly did) and Ed gets sent into a panic. It clearly shows some parental favoritism, and it's just really awful looking back. I never really noticed it as a kid, but it sucks that someone as nice as Ed has to constantly live in fear of his parents believing any type of story Sarah makes, b ut  up. I mean, I makes some episodes hard to watch, especially ones with Sarah as a main point in the episode. I just hope Child Protective Services comes soon.

5. Nina Tucker and Alexander (Fullmetal Alchemist Brotherhood): Before you say anything, yes I know that they were in the original, but I'm watching Brotherhood, which is a much better version of the original. And after what MislamicPearl told me about her Dad in the old series, I probably won't watch it. Nina and her dog, Alexander are just an average kid and an average dog, trying to enjoy life. Then, her failure of a father, again coming from my "Top 15 Most Hated Characters list ( My Top 15 Most Hated Characters (Part 1)So, I did a list of 20 characters I didn't like. A lot of people wanted me to list some reasons as to why, so OK. These are 15 characters that I hate bar none. There are no excuses, no second chances, no nothing. These are 10 characters that if they were on life support, I would unplug the life support to charge my Samsung Note 4. The listing in this is arbitrary, I have enough hate for all of these characters to go around equally. With that out of the way, I hope you enjoy.
1. Michiko Malandro (Michiko to Hatchin):
So, in that old list I made, I got questioned by Flutterbunny76 about including Zakuro from Tokyo Mew Mew and Huey from the Boondocks on my worst character list, and he was right. Honestly, I was trying to fill up space, and I couldn't think of many other characters. I mean, I'm not a fan of them, but hating them sounded really stupid. And thanks to PerfectZanderSanchez I remember a character I SHOULD'VE put on this list; Michiko Malandro, one of the main character
), realizes that he's going to lose his State Alchemist license because he's a failure as an alchemist, and decides to do a last minute experiment. And that experiment is turning Nina and Alexander into a talking Chimera. This change is permanent, and they can never turn back to normal. It sucks especially because Nina still loves her Dad, and it's very clear as Ed is beating up Shou. I just hate seeing kids that're abused still loving their parents. It's why I don't like Your Lie in April and Naruto because it's such a big part of both of those animes (at least unlike Brotherhood, we're not supposed to sympathize and care about the abusers). I was going to do a separate thing for Hinata and Naruto, but I'll just lump it in here, as the problem is evident in all three of these animes, with parent's not caring about their kids. At least in Brotherhood, this is the only time that it happens. I hate the fact that these kids love their scumbags of parents. I don't care if they're their parents, they don't act like it, and therefore, they don't deserve to have any part in their lives. 

6. Hana "Hatchin" Morenos (Michiko to Hatchin): Once again, kind of explained it in my "Top 15 Most Hated Characters List" ( My Top 15 Most Hated Characters (Part 1)So, I did a list of 20 characters I didn't like. A lot of people wanted me to list some reasons as to why, so OK. These are 15 characters that I hate bar none. There are no excuses, no second chances, no nothing. These are 10 characters that if they were on life support, I would unplug the life support to charge my Samsung Note 4. The listing in this is arbitrary, I have enough hate for all of these characters to go around equally. With that out of the way, I hope you enjoy.
1. Michiko Malandro (Michiko to Hatchin):
So, in that old list I made, I got questioned by Flutterbunny76 about including Zakuro from Tokyo Mew Mew and Huey from the Boondocks on my worst character list, and he was right. Honestly, I was trying to fill up space, and I couldn't think of many other characters. I mean, I'm not a fan of them, but hating them sounded really stupid. And thanks to PerfectZanderSanchez I remember a character I SHOULD'VE put on this list; Michiko Malandro, one of the main character
) but some of, if not all of, this stuff is worth repeating. I mean, she has to live with an abusive family. They're like crazy Christian people (well, at least the Dad is) who treat her like a slave. Seriously, when this show was advertised on Adult Swim, they literally showed her doing the chores of the house, and her getting picked on in a variety of ways. Now, you might think that her mother coming to save her was going to be an improvement for her, but...no, it wasn't. In fact, she got put in more danger than she was back in her crazy house, and that is really saying something. I mean, she get's kidnapped by gangs, beaten, robbed, and more. She probably would've been safer back at the house. She also doesn't get the best ending. Oh, and I forgot to mention, that's another reason why I hate this show; the crappy ending. I don't want to spoil it for you, but it makes the entire adventure Michiko and Hatchin go on pointless.

7. Butters (South Park): The first half of season 6 was "Torture Butters, the Show". I can list the plots of the first half of season 6 right now; the boys come up with a plan, use Butter's as a Guinea pig, and Butter's shitty parent's get in trouble at the end. Yeah, his parent's are terrible, and he is taken advantage of by the main 4 a lot. There's even an episode where Butter's mom tries to kill him because her husband was going to a gay porno theater. I asked you all a while back if Butter's parents are worse than Timmy Turner's parents, and everyone who responded said yes. And I have to agree, I mean, at least Timmy's dad is funny. There's nothing funny or entertaining about Butter's parents, and it makes me wish that he had gotten away with his evil plans as Professor Chaos. 

And that's all I can think of at the moment, but please don't hesitate to give me some suggestions. In the meantime, take a look at my account if you like this. After this, I'll probably do a journal on Black Rock Shooter, and, if 022288knarrow doesn't reply back to me on the discussion on "Candace get's Busted", if anyone else likes that episode, and wants to discuss with me, don't hesitate to ask. I also plan on doing a journal on Stein's Gate, Camp Camp, and a character comparison with Dan from Dan vs vs. Candace from Phineas and Ferb.
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Hexidextrous Featured By Owner 1 day ago
Hey man, I saw this other anime you might wanna let me know what you think of. Currently I haven't seen all of it, but I have mixed thoughts on it.


It's called Chuunibyou Ga Demo Shitai and basically it's about this girl named Rikka, who is apparently a Schizophrenic. Like it's one of those "grounded in reality" shows, but she acts like it isn't. Like for one, she wears an eyepatch because she believes that anyone who looks into that eye suffers a curse or something, and she carries around an umbrella thinking it's a magic weapon (none of this is real though, it's all in Rikka's head). And most of the show consists of her acting like this in front of her classmates, and them just reacting in various ways like being annoyed, playing along with it, or just ignoring her. Yet it wants me to sympathize with her.

I dunno about you, but currently I have mixed thoughts on it. Do you think it is a good show or not?  
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BlueRockShooter109 Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Student Writer
I haven't watched it, but I have heard about it. I'm not sure what to think of it, I mean, it sounds like a funny premise, having a couple of characters taking a real world environment, and them thinking that they have powers. But...the way you describe it makes me think of it in a way where it's just those kids annoying the hell out of everyone. 

If you want someone's opinion on the show, ask thecrimsondemon14 He knows a lot more about that show than I do. I almost didn't know what you were talking about by the way, as I know the show by it's English name; Love, Chunibyou, and Other Delusions. 
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thecrimsondemon14 Featured By Owner 1 day ago
they can be annoying but its mostly pretty funny

trust me  its not nearly as annoying as it could be and theres some legit funny jokes in it


if you like over the top  rom com animes ull probs enjoy it 
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ckallio Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Student Writer
So what are your thoughts on Neville leaving wwe. I think he should have stayed, I was predicting he would move out of the cruserweight division and on to bigger things.
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BlueRockShooter109 Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Student Writer
Even if he never left the Cruiserweight division, he was still an integral part of it. Also, if he feels better about leaving the company, that's his decision. But, at least he's in 2K18. 
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ckallio Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Student Writer
What do you think's gonna happen to him? Do you think he's going to Impact or somewhere else. It would be cool if he joined the Bullet Club somewhere.
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BlueRockShooter109 Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Student Writer
Somewhere else. Impact probably doesn't have the money to get him. I think he could go back to NJPW or to WCPW. 
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ckallio Featured By Owner 3 days ago  Student Writer
So I just started the Bayley vs Bliss review and I was wondering if you wanted to contribute anything. 
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BlueRockShooter109 Featured By Owner 3 days ago  Student Writer
Sorry, but I got two take home midterms to finish. I'd love to read what you do, though.
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ckallio Featured By Owner 3 days ago  Student Writer
Ok, but if you ever have time to add anything, like just talk about "Bayley this is your life" or anything, send me a note. I'm planning to finish the review before TLC because I talk about Asuka's upcoming debut in the beginning.  
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